Jason Romeo Bainne, who had the best driver award of Hennepin City in 2009, died Monday at the age of 53. Bainne drove a school bus with 22 students to Hennepin High School District. Then, he had a heart attack while driving. He stopped the bus on the side of Lyndale Avenue. He died on the bus before an ambulance came. A student, Maria Fondez, who sat next to the driver seat said, “I thought he was asleep when he drove slowly and parked the bus. Then, my friends and I call him, but he did not respond.” Linda Bainne, his wife, said, “He like his works and never used his vacation for rest. He worked this duty for 5 years and earned his award last year.”
Short and simple. But I like how it emphasizes his simple life. Including the quotes helped make it a good obituary. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Brittney. Quotes add spice to all articles and obituaries too.It shows aspects of a person's life that cannot be described any other way. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job. I love that you kept it short. I felt connected to the obituary by the way you wrote it. Made me sad that he died even though I knew it was fake. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteI like the use of the quotation in this. I think it adds a personal touch.
ReplyDeleteit was nicely put together...could use some more details but all in all well done!
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