Thursday, February 10, 2011

Blog # 3 Story 2

The County Commissioner voted 5-2 against the sheriff’s request for funding for new vehicles and additional deputies

         On Thursday afternoon, The ABC County sheriff and County Commissioners met at ABC County to discuss equipment and personnel for the 2011 budget, and the sheriff requested for additional money for eight new vehicles to replace older ones and five more deputies . The Commission President Anne Chenn and four commissioners disagreed, but two commissioners agreed with the sheriff.
         As the heated discussion continued, Commissioners, Anita Shenuski and Raymond Laybourne said the country should spend more money on law enforcement rather than the programs for migrant workers. Shenuski believed migrant workers take jobs from “decent” people by work the next to nothing. However, other commissioners disagreed that workers were kind and hard-working; who work jobs that the local residents would not want to work. By adding migrant workers, opposing commissioners felt the economy would be increased.
         DiCesari said, "I can't buy anything. this is the first time in my 27 years as sheriff that the county hasn't allocated money to the sheriff's department to buy equipment." He also said letting the deputies drive the cars home decreased crime. Chenn suggested that deputies should not drive cars home to make cars more available and preserve mileage. Despite, Dicesari’s argument to request for new equipment was denied.

4 comments:

  1. You did a great job putting the important details into your story. I also enjoyed the length of your story because I was not left wanting to know more.

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  2. I really enjoyed reading this, it was easy to follow and stated the details. Now I have realized what the lead is suppose to be like, so thank you for making your lead easy to notice!

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  3. Good job! I liked how you personalized the story. It is very creative.

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  4. Great job personalizing the story! I like how you focused on the conflicts reguarding the migrant workers and kept the story simple!

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